雅思写作精简建议
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篇1：雅思写作精简建议
Children should never be educated at home by their parents.
Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
Model Answer:
Nobody can say with confidence that children should be taught at home or at any children's institutions. There are many different children and every one demand of education suitable only for him.
But for most of children the best way of learning the life is being in the children's institutions. Nobody would argue that contacts between children of the same age are very important for bringing your child up. Such a contact is very important for playing, entertaining and learning living with other people. The harmonious living with other people, to my mind, is the first task for any man. Lack of this harmony sets problems and troubles.
The children need space to run and make noise, to jump and cry. Do you or your neighbours allow these actions for your child? If you live in town, it is difficult to find a safe place to play. Kindergartens give such a possibility. They give space, a lot of toys and constructions for physical exercises. So, if you have bad living conditions, the kindergarten is the best way for you. But if you have a large family with many children and enough space, you may keep your child at home. You should be sure that the child feels, dressed and comfortable. His brothers and sisters give him necessary contacts. It's noticed long ago that children in big families are much more easy-tempered and calm. They are located in more harmonic world than others.
Sometimes differences in age put troubles in contacts between children in large families. Then it is better for child to be sent to the kindergarten (school). But if quarrels don't last for a long time, everything is all right. In general, quarrels develop ability to cooperate with people. They develop a personal initiative and force setting the balance. In such a way the child gets lessons of life. Addly, the quarrels often take place in kindergartens and schools and we shouldn't fear it.
Side by side with quarrels parents often are afraid of colds which happen in kindergartens more frequently. Parents prefer keeping the child at home. But for a healthy child odd cold (if illness occurs, it goes its normal course) can't make big harm to the child. And if the child is adaptable to the conditions of public places earlier it would be better for him in future.
In general, I am a follower of the theory of keeping children in adapted places such as good kindergartens. But keeping children in such a place can't replace family and home. Only together they make harmonic and beautiful union.
篇2：雅思写作精简建议
Write about the following topic:
School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills.
Do you agree or disagree?
Model Answer:
Nowadays modern technology has totally changed our approach to study. In many countries students no longer have to copy notes by hand from the blackboard; instead the teacher gives them a photocopy. Rather than messy ink and pen, students present a typed-up copy of their assignments. Their computer even checks their spelling as they go. In fact, some people believe that modern technology does a lot of our thinking for us and, as a result, we are going to lose our ability to think for ourselves.
In my opinion, spelling skills have definitely deteriorated in recent years. So many young people use mobile phones to send text messages where speed and conciseness are more important than spelling or grammar. Some teachers complain that these students take the same attitude toward their assignments.
On the other hand, typed assignments are much easier to read and are much neater. Frankly, I find some notes or texts which are handwritten almost impossible to read. Doctors, for example, have a reputation for illegible handwriting, which could lead to disastrous medical mistakes. Perhaps it is time we focused not on handwriting but on presenting information as accurately as possible.
One advantage of computers is that access to the Internet has opened up a new world of learning for us. We no longer have to wait for a book that has already been borrowed from the library before we do our research. In fact, the Internet can clearly be used to research information in the same way as a library but more conveniently.
On the whole, rather than holding students back, I believe modern technology has actually improved standards of education considerably.
雅思写作
篇3：雅思写作考试如何精简语句
雅思写作考试如何精简语句
词汇精简技巧
雅思写作精简建议一：避免空洞的单词和词组
1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关或重要的信息，完全可以删掉。
比如：When all things are considered， young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents， in my opinion.
这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换。
例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have now.
雅思写作精简建议二：避免重复
1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。
例如下面这个例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更简洁的表达方式为：
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换。
例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.
这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁：
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.
雅思写作精简建议三：选择最恰当的语法结构
选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要，但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则：
1.一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中最重要的意思。
例如：The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.
从意思上来分析，上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”，而在表达这个概念时，原句用的主语是situation，谓语动词是was，不能强调需要表达的重点概念，可以改为下面这句话：
My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.
2.避免频繁使用“there be”结构。
例如下面的句子：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.
可以改为：
My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.
更简洁的句式为：
My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.
3.把从句改为短语或单词。
例如：Dairy cows were raised on the farm，which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an areathat was remote.
简介的表达方式为：
The dairy farm was located in a remotearea， 100 kilometers to the nearest university.
4.仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候，才使用被动语态。
例如：In the fall， not only did the cows haveto be milked， but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather'sfamily.
本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-mygrandfather's family”，而使用了被动语态後，彷佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态，相对来说更简洁一些：
In the fall， my grandfather's family notonly milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.
5.用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语。
例如：My grandfather didn't have time tostand around doing nothing with his school friends.
Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达，即loiter：
My grandfather didn't have time toloiter with his school friends.
6.有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达。
例如：Profits from the farm were not times they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They werenot sufficient to pay for a university degree.
两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子：
Profits from the farm were sometimes toosmall to meet operational expenses， let alone pay for a university degree.
小作文写作技巧
1. 雅思小作文写作结构搭建：
(1) 第一段的introduction：直接改写题目——句型主动改被动或是反之，单词可做稍微替换，虽然说改写比较简单，但是这一步骤缺一不可。一定要改写题目，一定不能照抄。
(2) 第二段的overview：图表中，你最先看到的，最最明显的特征，你这里可以做以下稍微的总结，因为怕你后面没时间进行总结，小作文的时间最多只有20分钟，要放在大作文后面写，很多时候大作文会占据大于40分钟的时间，那么你的小作文时间就会来不及，那么在这里你对于最最明显的特征进行总结，就算到后面没时间，也不会因为没有对图表特征进行总结而扣分。
(3) 第三段的details：图表所提供的信息就是需要你进行对比的。对比分两种：纵向和横向。纵向是跟自己比，比之前自己增长了，还是下降了;横向比是跟别人比，跟比人比我是第一还是最后。图表中的数据信息，你无需所有的数据都写在你的文中里，只需要特征明显的，比如位于首位，位于最后这种，还有就是一定要进行对比。
(4) 如果你前面的overview段有总结了，就无需再来个结尾段了，不过要是有时间，你也可以进行一句话的结尾。
2. 雅思小作文素材积累
这边给大家展示我自己所积累的小作文用到的素材。大家每天都拿出来看一遍，写小作文的时候尽量用上去。
时期：from…to， between…and， over/ during the period from 1995 to =over/during the period of one decade
上升：go up， climb， grow， rise， increase， ascend， show an upward trend=show an increasing/rise trend
表明/揭示：show/reveal/indicate/reflect/present/describe/illustrate/demonstrate/compare/give informationabout + n
缓慢、逐渐：slow， slowly=gradually=steadily=consistently=step by step，contious
迅速：rapid， quick， swift，sudden， sharp， dramatic
小幅度：slight(ly)， modest(ly)， moderate(ly)， marginal(ly)
大幅度、明显：sharp，drastic， considerable， noticeable， marked， dramatic， significant， substantially，
下降：fall， go down， drop， decrease， decline， descend， dip， dipped， show a downward trend， plummet， plunge
波动：fluctuate， fluctuation，eg： rise with some fluctuation， go up and down=be unstable/flexible=be in instability/flexibility
保持平稳、不变：level out/off at + n=stabilize / hover at + n= reach a plateau at + n
Stay/keep/remain/maintain + stable/ unchanged/constant at+ n
大约：about，around， almost， nearly， roughly， approximately， just over/under…，… or so
达到最大值：reach the maximum=reach the peak/summit/culmination at + n=peak/summit/culminate at…=reach the highest point at
达到最小值： reach the minimum=reach/touch the bottom at…=bottom out at…=reach the lowest point at…
补充：according to = in accordance with= based in= in terms of =in the light of = in line with
Comparing…=compared with/to…=in comparison with…= different from…
While， whilst， whereas， yet
To conclude， in conclusion=to summarize， in summary=to sum up=all in all =overall
3. 雅思小作文写作训练
小作文就最适合这种模式性的训练啦。有了上面的框架，还有就是积累各种说明文的上升下降，巨变啥的表达。去找那些老师们整理好的资源呗，不用自己准备了，你要做的就是直接拿来用。这是站在巨人肩膀上，哈哈。
我用的是9分达人的那个母题训练，在清楚写作骨骼的前提下，再来补充血肉和灵魂，哈哈。然后积累范文里面的好句子。有了骨架，写作材料就是血和肉，你的主题思想就是写作思路就是你整篇文章的灵魂，三者缺一不可。
一定要练习哈!三天就可以来一次训练了，我很庆幸找到了一个一起奋斗的小烤鸭，我们互相监督，互相批改，严格的时间内完成，然后两个人进行讨论修改，再写，再改，就是这么一路走过来的。也不要套模板吧，就是明白了写作模式，有了框架，再加上题目的写作思路，有了灵魂，再加上你的词句，有了血肉，其实就是你自己的模板。这个时候你的小伙伴是很重要的，大家一起高歌欢唱，才会让自己走得更远。
雅思写作高分技巧—步骤详解
雅思写作一直是困扰烤鸭们的难题，大家虽然耗费了很长的一段时间在雅思写作上，但是效果却没有很好，那么今天为大家带来雅思写作高分技巧，希望大家能认真阅读学习。
我们都知道雅思写作分为两个部分：TASK1 和 TASK2。TASK1需要在20分钟内完成，TASK2需要在40分钟内完成。下面就TASK2部分进行剖析，找到其提高技巧。
首先看到一个写作题目，要对其进行分析，以确保其写作方向。千万不要写跑题了，或者背离文章的主题思想。这是雅思写作的第一步。
例 如：Some parents in the United Kingdom decide not to have a television intheir home. They believe that, by doing this, their children will spend theleisure time more creatively. To what extent do you agree or disagree with thisdecision?
当遇到这样一个题目的时候，我们应该先分析，然后确定自己的写作方向，是agree，disagree还是要二者兼顾。通常就是从这三方面来写，而不要把重点放到其他的地方。
一般来说，雅思文章的结构通常就是：第一段：现象句+考题改写+本人立场，第二段:论证一(topic sentence +支持句)，第三段: 论证 二(topic sentence +支持句) 第四段: 论证三(topic sentence +支持句), 第五段：总结段。
这种写法与以前我们传统的议论文的写法几乎相同。在论证的过程中要做到论证的有理有据，内容要有深度，而非浅显的毫无说服力的文字。这是文章得高分得关键之一。
例如这样一句话，说出来就没有任何意义：I like Hollywood movies because I like them. 相反，如果换个说法：I like Hollywood movies because its comedies attract me most. 这样说出来才有意义。通常在写文章得时候可以把考生分成两类，一类是遇到了一篇自己很熟悉的题目，写起来便滔滔不绝了，一发而不可收，控制不了自己。
另一类则是无话可说，该说的话没的有说出来。我们不妨把作文的要求量化到每一个段落:一篇200词左右的作文一般不会超过15句话，把这15句话根据题目要求分配到各段中去，每一段大概只说那么几句话，绝不多说。
事实上往往是说得越多，错误越多。因此，跟着提纲走，每一段不要写得太多，点到为止，见好就收，这才是最稳妥的对策。考生在平时的练习中可以训练自己快速列出提纲得能力，这是一个事半功倍得好方法，不仅可以帮你整理自己得写作思路，还可以训练你的快速反映能力。最主要的是提纲可以帮你清晰的把握文章的脉络，对于写作分数的提高很有帮助。
在雅思写作中语言和句式的巧妙运用也可以为文章增色不少。 在写作时用简单的语言把复杂的意思表达出来可谓是伟大之举。
对于一个一时找不着词的概念，应该用一种迂回曲折的方式把意思表达清楚。或用一个短语，或用一个从句，或三言两语，只要没出什么语言错误。雅思写作中有三个捷径，可以使文章更容易获得高分。
他们是：倒装句，插入语，强调句。如果文章中出现几处这样的句子，相信考官对你的写作水平是会另眼相看的。要是文章看上去更加活泼，单一的陈述句是不够的，可以适当的穿插一些“修辞问句”，这样的文章看上去会更加灵动。
例如：Firstly, in order to know itself better, a country needs to remember thepast. “Why we have these traditions? Why our culture and lifestyle are differentfrom other countries?” Those questions about us can only be answered by thehistory of the country. In addition, from the past, we can also learn lots ofthings. As old person always says “the past just like a mirror which can help usdo better in the future”. Indeed, from the failures and successes in the past,we can seek reasons, thus can avoid making similar mistakes.
句子 “Why we have these traditions? Why our culture and lifestyle aredifferent from other countries?” 放在这一段落中是不是看上去更加活泼了。
总之，熟悉雅思写作的出题思路，把握雅思的出题方向，掌握雅思的写作技巧，那么高分将悄然而至。
雅思写作高分技巧：让你的文章锦上添花
雅思写作要求学生完成两篇内容准确合理，文章连贯，词汇准确丰富和语法正确句式多元的文章。总结下来就一个词“锦上添花”。内容准确合理和连贯，表达正确是作文的“锦”，而词汇丰富和句式多元是“花”。
在和许多考生接触的过程中，很多考生去背诵一些所谓的雅思词汇却不知道如何正确使用，就会出现表达生硬，用词不当的情况。其实的所谓的难词、难词并不是帮助学生在词汇方面获得高分的决定因素，而是准确恰当，符合英语表达习惯的词汇和词组才是关键。
来看看一些考生用错词汇的例子:
缓解冲突
不恰当：solve the conflict
修改：resolvethe conflict
分析观点
不恰当：pinpoint the argument
修改：analyse the argument
分析事件
过分复杂：anatomies (剖析) theissue
修改：analysethe issue
致命疾病
不准确：deathful disease
修改：deadly/fataldisease
严重的问题
不正式：terrible problem
修改：pressing/urgentproblem
光临店铺
不准确：patronage the shop
修改：patronize/frequentthe shop
上升趋势
不准确：an increase trend
修改：agrowing trend
要学会如何准确用词，首先要了解这个词汇、词组使用的语境，而不是望文生义的记背单词，然后按照中式思维，生搬硬套，胡乱搭配，往往出错。如何去恰当的用词呢?首先，雅思阅读。在阅读一篇文章的时候，考生可以看到一些词汇是如何搭配，在什麽样的上下文中准确使用，在什麽语境下意思不同等等。唯有如此，才能完全掌握一个词汇或者词组的使用方法。
其次，雅思阅读之后记下符合英语表达习惯的词组，也就是collocation。这是体现作者英文功底的关键。
篇4：雅思写作分数提高几点小建议
This line chart gives specific information about the changes in the proportions of people who had five technologies in five years (-).
这一图表给出了5年(1997-2001)五项技术的人口比例变化的具体信息。
From a general view, the ubiquity of modern technology increased among citizens while the popularity of CD player was overwhelming compared to that of rest four items.
从一般的观点来看，现代科技的普及在公民中越来越普遍，而CD播放器的流行程度与rest的四项相比是压倒性的。
In 1997, more than half (60%) of the population used CD players and also 40% of people had computers. However, much less people had access to DVD player, telephone calls and internet with percentage of users below 30%, especially for internet at just 10%.
，超过一半(60%)的人口使用CD播放器，40%的人有电脑。然而，更少的人可以使用DVD播放器、电话和互联网，用户比例低于30%，尤其是在互联网上，这一比例仅为10%。
Half decade later, steady increases could be observed in residents using CD players and computers users of which accounted for 80% and 70% respectively in 2001. At the same time, telephone calls popularized at a stunning rate, with proportion of users rising rapidly and overtaking people with computers to nearly 80%. An initial fall between 1997 and in ratio of people made DVD player less embraced compared with internet though both figures underwent a steady climb in next four years, ending at 40% for DVD and 50 % for internet.
50年后，在使用CD播放器和电脑用户的居民中，的比例分别为80%和70%。与此同时，电话通话以惊人的速度普及，用户比例迅速上升，超过了电脑用户的比例接近80%。19至，与互联网相比，人们的DVD播放器的比例下降了，但这两个数字在接下来的四年里都经历了稳步攀升，DVD和互联网的比例分别为40%和50%。
10月11日雅思大作文真题范文：教育公平问题
雅思大作文题目
Some people think that it is too difficult for poor people or people from rural areas to go to university. So that the universities should make it especially easy to them. Do you agree or disagree?
雅思大作文范文解析
本题讨论的话题是穷人或是来自农村的学生很难上大学，所以大学应该对他们降低入学标准。该问题属于单边讨论-选择同意或不同意。
雅思大作文文章结构
P1：引入话题+亮明观点(不同意);
P2：这种做法有失公平,只有公平竞争才能保证大学教育的优质。
P3：学生很可能因为受到特殊待遇而不努力学习。
P4:让步段 (counter-argument)—大学资源有限，无法保证每个人都能够接受大学教育。穷人确实因为资源有限无法接收到良好的教育而错失很多机会。
P5：总结全文。
篇5：雅思写作分数提高几点小建议
It is a common sense that students from rural communities have less access to higher education. Under such cases, some suggest that the problem should be solved by guaranteeing more chances for disadvantaged students through lowering standards for enrolling them into universities. From my perspective, I am not in favour of the above statement.
农村社区的学生接受高等教育的机会较少，这是一种常识。在这种情况下，一些人提出，通过降低入学标准，为弱势学生提供更多的机会，从而解决这个问题。从我的角度来看，我不赞成上述声明。
To start with, it is unfair for their counterparts who are from urban areas or wealthy background since they have to take the same college entrance examinations or interviews under the same assessment rubric. Consequently, the results turn out to be unreliable and will wind up being meaningless. The privilege is likely to result in the over‐reliance on their impoverished barckground.
首先，对于来自城市地区或富有背景的人来说，这是不公平的，因为他们必须在同样的评估报告下接受同样的大学入学考试或面试。结果是，结果是不可靠的，最终会变得毫无意义。这种特权很可能会导致对他们贫困的土地的过度依赖。
Worse yet, if university education opportunities are easily offered to poor students, they tend to take it for granted. In fact, as many poor students usually endeavour to exert their academic capacities for university scholarship and bursary, their academic performances will be affected when their goals are easily achieved, which could limit their academic achievement.
更糟糕的是，如果大学教育机会很容易被提供给贫困学生，他们往往会认为这是理所当然的。事实上，由于许多贫困学生通常努力发挥他们的学术能力来获得大学奖学金和助学金，他们的学业成绩将会受到影响，因为他们的目标很容易实现，这可能会限制他们的学业成绩。
Granted, myriad rural areas have faced a severe shortage of teaching resource, leading to illiteracy and fewer chances to attend university. Apart from this, rural communities can gradually escape from poverty through far-reaching changes in education. The potentials of those who are poor and rural are hard to be exploited either due to their limited financial means or inadequate facility, which means that they are not competing on the same level with those who are affluent or from cities.
诚然，无数的农村地区面临着严重的教学资源短缺，导致了文盲和上大学的机会减少。除此之外，农村社区可以通过教育的深远变化逐步摆脱贫困。穷人和农村人的潜力很难被利用，这可能是由于他们的财力有限或设施不足，这意味着他们没有与富裕或来自城市的人在同一水平上竞争。
To sum up, despite some related benefits when it comes to easier university admissions to students who are from poverty-stricken areas, there are significantly more concerns that should not be ignored.
雅思A类写作话题分析：新媒体泛滥问题
在雅思写作训练中，对话题的分析和总结非常重要。通常雅思写作话题很多很多，但是他们都有互通性，正确的分析和总结雅思写作话题，有利于训练考生把握话题的能力。今天小站君为大家带来20雅思A类写作话题分析关于老龄化问题。
在雅思写作训练中，对话题的分析和总结非常重要。通常雅思写作话题很多很多，但是他们都有互通性，正确的分析和总结雅思写作话题，有利于训练考生把握话题的能力。面对新的话题，考生能够有效联想相关老话题内容和资料。考生也不需要重复背模板和素材，能够提高写作效率。今天，小站君将结合一道雅思写作真题进行思路分析，来更全面的讲解关于老龄化的写作思路。
雅思写作真题News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?
(新媒体越来越重要在如今的社会，你觉得这是积极的影响吗?)
【关键词分析】
从上述的真题可以清楚知道，关键词就是media，通常我们知道的是它的复数形式medium。它覆盖面比较广泛，有print media，如newspaper, magazine;broadcast media，如radio, television, 以及new media，主要指the Internet. 这些媒体我们可以概括为mass media。而上述题目是news media，所以需要围绕新闻展开，不能提及媒体的综艺性和娱乐性。
【题型解析与结构思路】
上述题目，要知道属于混搭类题型，也就是说需要说明原因，以及好坏分析。具有说明文和议论文相结合的特点。常规的说明文只需要说明一下问题，原因和影响，然后提出解决方法。而混搭型则是年雅思A类写作话题常常遇到的，因此考生需要额外注意。因此，小站君建议考生用五段书写，其中三段需要交待原因，有利的，消极的。
通常原因未明可以说信息时代的发展，特别是手机技术的革新，让人们随时随地可以浏览新闻，于是人们越来越依赖手机获取消息。好处可以说提供了很多信息，例如政府政策，招聘信息，时事热点，吃喝玩乐等。让大家选择更多，花在查询上的时间更少等。坏处可以说为了争取热点。导致夸张标题，假新闻，侵犯隐私，或者一些带有煽动性的民族主义思想等。以及很难发现事件的真相等。结尾考生可以总结一下新媒体的利与弊，列举一些方法，例如出台一些措施，然后规范一些新媒体的公众准则等。
篇6：雅思写作基础句型及写作的建议
We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people.
In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)?
Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.
Model Answer:
A large number of people spend most of their time at work. Our life is divided into three equal parts: 8 hours - sleep, 8 hours - work, 8 hours - family time. So, in the most cases, one's co-worker plays an important role in one's life. From my opinion, the essential characteristics of a co-worker are the following.
First of all, a person who works closely with me must like his job. I think it is very important for a person to feel satisfaction with his job. My husband is a software developer. He is fond of his job and people enjoy working with him because they see how many energy he puts into his job.
Second of all, my co-worker must be persistent and never give up. I like when people who came across a problem try to solve it, find a good decision instead of looking for another person to hand it over. Another important aspect of this is that a good worker should always ask himself “What can be improved?” and suggests new solutions.
In addition, he must be a good team player. In the modern world good communication skills and the ability to work in a team are among the common position requirements. Personally, I think it is great to help each other, share new ideas, develop new solutions, etc. It helps to create a team spirit and improve labor productivity.
Finally, my co-worker must be punctual. He or she should finish the job on time I think that It is unacceptable to make the rest of a team wait while a person finishes his or her job. Also, my “ideal co-worker” should always be ready to offer his or her help and be supportive.
To summarize, I think if a co-worker possesses all of these qualities mentioned above he can make work with him really enjoyable and productive.
篇7：雅思写作基础句型及写作的建议
Write about the following topic:
Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans.
Do you agree or disagree?
Model Answer:
It is true that there have been great advances in technology over the last forty years. For example / For instance the use of mobile phones and e-mail communication are common these days. However, machines that translate from one language to another are still in their early stages.
It seems to me that a machine could never do as good a job as a human, especially when it comes to interpreting what people are saying. Of course, machines can translate statements such as “Where is the bank?” but even simple statements are not always straightforward because the meaning depends on more than just words. For instance / For example the word “bank” has a number of different meanings in English. How does a translating machine know which meaning to take?
In order to understand what people are saying, you need to take into account the relationship between the speakers and their situation. A machine cannot tell the difference between the English expression “Look out!” meaning “Be careful!” and “Look out!” meaning “Put your head out of the window”. You need a human being to interpret the situation.
Similarly with written language, it is difficult for a machine to know how to translate accurately because we rarely translate every word. On the contrary, we try to take into consideration how the idea would be expressed in the other language. This is hard to do because every language has its own way of doing and saying things.
For these reasons I feel that it is most unlikely that machines will take the place of humans in the field of translating and interpreting. If machines ever learn to think, perhaps then they will be in a position to take on this role.
雅思写作
